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From Ms. Casson's comments on my pitch, I realised that I didn't completely keep to the brief with my pitch as I focused too strongly on fashion and beauty, especially within vintage culture, rather than including a more diverse range of topics. I think my only focus on fashion will be an issue on modernising vintage fashion to suit Hijabi people to show that vintage fashion can be adapted to suit anyone (which meets the brief criteria of representation of different social groups). Another comment Ms. Casson made was that the idea of using intertextuality to Donyale Luna, the first black woman on Vogue, was something I could focus on more heavily. I also think I will include both male and female models in my magazine.